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#1 2010-10-11 20:27:45

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Listy do kolegi i dialog - prosze o sprawdzenie

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Dear Sam ,
How are you and your familly?
I'm writting to tell you that I'm studying psychology in Toruń. It is a beautiful place with wonderful atractions. People can see monument of Mikołaj Kopernik, vistit the planetarium, go on the famous gingerbread and much more.
I live in a small house on the outskirts. Classes begin at 9 am so I have to wake up very early. I have three hours for toilet and access to college, but that's enought for me. My favourite subjects are personality and mential disorders people. (Osobowość i zaburzenia psychiczne ludzi).Profesor Jonson has been teaching these course for many years. I like him because he reminds me my grandfather. The profesor is a little def but durning the lectures he often tells about his students years. It is interesting.
I'm frogot to say  that next semestr I'm going to a cholarship to Scotland.
I hope to see you soon.
                                    Yours sincerely
                                                             XYZ

Dear Nicole,
How are you?
I'm writting to thanks you for your letter.
I hope you are pass all the exams. Unfortunately, i Didn,t. For two weeks I was sick and I had problems with the make material. If for this week I will not correct notes, I will not include a semestr. I have a lot of job but not much time. So from tomorrow I'm begin the hard work. Of course I will not froget about the rest, What do you think, it is enaught? Whanewer. There will be what must be. I have a hope, that I will pass the exams.
I have a reguest to you. Cauld you send me the photosh from ceremony of graduation? It will be great! Say hello to Tom.
See you soon
                  Your
                         XYZ

- Hi
- Hi. Nice to see you
- Yu too. Do yau heard that dr.House is coming to England?
- Really? Who is it?
- Are you jokening? You never heard about House?
- I'm speak serious.The frist time I hear about him.
- House is a famous profesor of medical science. The next month he is coming to England to give a lecture on genetics.
- Oh..
- I woudl like to go, because I have to write a essay with biology, but i haven't money to pay for a ticket and I don't want to go alone.
- It's a pity. Can I halp you?
- Yes. If I come with someone I get a large discount. Will you come with me?
- This is not a good idea. I don't like medicine because is boring.
- It's not true. You will learn many interesting things. House combines learning with fun. He says funny but intelligible. I'm promise that you won't be bores.
- I;m not shure..
- Please. I need you help. In return, we will spend the weekend as you want.
- Ok. But If I don't like it, you buy me a double chocolate ice cream.
- No worries. Ypu save me life. This essey deside about my note for a semestr. You are a wonderful friend.
- The pleasure is on my side. I'm glad that T can help.

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#2 2010-10-12 17:34:57

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Re: Listy do kolegi i dialog - prosze o sprawdzenie

Pierwszy tekst

masz literówke visit, ale rozumiem, że to przez to pisanie na komputerze
human psychiatric disorders - to bym użyła jako zaburzenia psychiczne człowieka
I'm going to a cholarship to Scotland. zdanie jest ok, ale jak jesteś pewna na 100% to proponuje użyć future
ogólnie wg mnie jest ok.

Drugi tekst:

thanks- to dzięki, ja bym użyła tu thank - podziękować.
proponuje zamiast correct albo improve

według mnie te dwa teksty sa ok.

pozdrawiam, życze powodzenia;)

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#3 2010-10-14 21:53:26

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Re: Listy do kolegi i dialog - prosze o sprawdzenie

Nie zgodzę się z eltezetką... w pracach jest trochę błędów, ale nie jakiś rażących smile poniżej mała korekta:

I'm writting to tell you that I STUDY (Present Simple, bo nie robisz tego tylko w tym momencie) psychology in Toruń.
People can see THE (konkretny pomnik) monument of Mikołaj Kopernik, visit the planetarium, TASTE SOME (stylistyka)  famous gingerbread and DO MANY OTHER THINGS (troszkę lepiej brzmi jeśli po wymienianiu różnych czynności tutaj też posłużysz się czasownikiem).
MY (najbezpieczniej bo nie trzeba się głowić nad rodzajnikiem wink) classes begin at 9 am so I have to wake up very early.
My favourite subjects are personality STUDIES (wtedy wiadomo, że to oddzielny przedmiot, inaczej trochę zlewa się z mental disorders) and MENTAL (literówka) disorders (IN PEOPLE - ale nie jest konieczne).
Profesor Jonson has been teaching these SUBJECTS (odpowiedniejsze tutaj, moim znadniem wink)for many years.
I like him because he reminds me OF ( remind sb of sth/sb) my grandfather.
The profesor is a little deAF (głuchy?) but DURING (literówka) the lectures he often tells US (po czasowniku TELL zawsze wymieniamy osobę/adresata) about his students years.
It is VERY (żeby to trochę ubogacić smile) interesting.
I FORGOT (bez "'M" i literówka) to MENTION (stylistyka)  that I'm going to a Scholarship (literówka - brak "s") to Scotland next semestr (lepiej dodać określnik czasu na końcu).


I'm writting to thank (bez s) you for your letter.
I hope you PASSED (past simple!) all the exams.
Unfortunately, I didn't.
I HAVE BEEN SICK ( Present Perfect ponieważ ma to wpływ na teraźniejszość -> oblane egzaminy)for two weeks and I had problems with the make UP (=nadrobić) the material.
If I DON'T (zdanie warunkowe typu 1) correct MY GRADES (=oceny w szkole), I will not PASS (=zaliczyć) THIS semestEr.
I have a lot of WORK (=praca, jako coś do zrobienia, a nie zawód) but A LITTLE (stylistyka) time. So, STARTING from (=począwszy od jutra - domyślam się, że o to chodziło - nie można tego zrobić z samym "from", to jest najlepsze fixed phrase w tej sytuacji) tomorrow, (przecinek!) I begin ( bez " 'M" -> konstrukcja typowa po wyrażeniu "starting from") the hard work.
Of course, (przecinek) I will not fORget (znów ta sama literówka) about the rest. (kropka chyba powinna być) HOW ( jeśli chodzi o "jak myślisz, czy...?") do you think, IS IT ENOUGH (literówki i inwersja is i it)? WHATEVER (=nieważne, zresztą, tak czy siak, itp). WHAT MUST BE, MUST BE (=wyrażenie potoczne).
I HOPE (już samo to - bez have - oznacza mieć nadzieję) I will pass the exams.
COuld (literówka) you send me the photos(literówka) from THE (ta konkretna) ceremony of graduation?
It WOULD (=byłoby świetnie) be great!


- YOu too. HAVE YOU HEARD albo DID YOU HEAR that dr. House is coming to England?
- Really? Who is HE?
- Are you joking(liter.)? YOU HAVE NEVER HEAD ABOUT dr. House?
- I'm BEING serious. THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I HEAR ABOUT HIM.
- House is a famous profFesor of medical science. Next (THE jest niepotrzebne) month he is coming to England to give a lecture on genetics.
- I wouLD like to go, because I have to write a biology essay (zmiana kolejności) , but I DON'T HAVE money to pay for THE ticket and I don't want to go alone.
- It's a pity. Can I hElp you SOMEHOW (=jakoś)?
- Yes. If I come with someone I WILL get a discount.
I don't like medicine because IT is boring.
He TEACHES IN A funny but intelligible WAY.
I PROMISE that you won't be boreD.
- I'm not SURE (liter.)..
I need youR help.
- Ok. But If I don't like it, you WILL buy me a double chocolate ice cream.
- DON'T WORRY.
YOu ARE SAVING me life.
This essAy deCideS about my SEMESTER GRADE.
- IT'S MY PLEASURE (nie należy tłumaczyć tego dosłownie z polskiego).
I'm glad that I can help.



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